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    #1

    Question woul you please correct these two quoets?

    Hi,

    "Be not in a hurry for giving punishment to a wrongdoer, but give some opportunity to him to apologize."

    "Oh, my friend, three things are caustic and fatal: poverty after wealth, misery after glory, and loosing your friends."

    Thanks in advance

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    #2

    Re: woul you please correct these two quoets?

    Quote Originally Posted by Ever Student View Post
    Hi,

    "Be not in a hurry for giving punishment to a for wrongdoer, wrongdoing but give some opportunity to him to apologize for apology."

    "Oh, my friend, three things are caustic and fatal: poverty after wealth, misery after glory, and loosingloss of your friends (OR "loss of friendship" ) ."

    Thanks in advance
    b.
    Last edited by billmcd; 14-Oct-2011 at 14:19. Reason: typo

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    #3

    Re: woul you please correct these two quoets?

    Quote Originally Posted by billmcd View Post
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    Hi, thanks a bunch for editing.

    I have a question for you:

    For what reason have you eliminated "wrongdoer" and its reference?

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    #4

    Re: woul you please correct these two quoets?

    Quote Originally Posted by Ever Student View Post
    Hi, thanks a bunch for editing.

    I have a question for you:

    For what reason have you eliminated "wrongdoer" and its reference?
    I would prefer to focus on the action rather than on the actor.

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