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    Punctuation in my resume

    My dear teachers,
    I have made my resume. But I don't know if all of the punctuation marks that I used are correct. Please help.

    Thanks in advance.


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    Re: Punctuation in my resume

    If you post your cv in full, preferably here:
    Editing & Writing Topics , CVs, Resumes and Applications, people are more likely to look at it. Some of us do not open files.

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    Re: Punctuation in my resume

    I have moved it and it is better to post the text rather than attaching a file as many people do not open files like this for security reasons.

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    Re: Punctuation in my resume

    Here is my resume:


    Cxxxxxxx, DAGUPAN CITY
    E-MAIL: EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead
    CONTACT NO.: +########
    Objective:
    To obtain a position as a secondary education Mathematics teacher in your institution to maximize my university training by sharing my learning experiences and acquired expertise in the field of mathematics.

    Profile:
    Dedicated to teaching with commitment to student learning and development; skilled in leading classes in interesting and interactive learning initiatives.

    Educational Background:
    College University of Pangasinan-Phinma, Dagupan City – 2011
    Bachelor of Secondary Education, Major in Mathematics

    Awards Received:
    • Champion: Regional PAFTE 1 Quiz Bee during the Second Semester of AY: 2010-2011.
    • One of the TOP 25 University Dean’s Listers during the First Semester of AY: 2010-2011.
    • One of the TOP 25 University Dean’s Listers during the Second Semester of AY: 2009-2010.

    Secondary Mangaldan National High School, Mangaldan Pangasinan – 2006

    Elementary Mangaldan Central School, Magnaldan Pangasinan – 2002

    Extra Curricular Activities:

    Vice President – University of Pangasinan College of Education Mathematics
    Students’ Organization (2010-2011)

    Vice President – University of Pangasinan College of Education Mathematics
    Students’ Organization (2009-2010)
    Pre-Service Training:

    Observation and Participation
    • Dagupan City National High School
    • Judge Jose De Venecia Sr. Memorial National High School
    • University of Pangasinan-Phinma Education Network, High School Department (University of Pangasinan High School)
    • Bonuan Boquig National High School

    Training and Seminars Attended:

    Topic: “PAFTE 1: Towards Quality Assurance in Teacher Education”
    Date: Febuary 28, 2011
    Place: DMMMSU-SLUC, Agoo, La Union.

    Topic: Teacher Education Update, Field study and Practice Teaching, and Preparation for the Licensure Examination for Teachers
    Date: August 24, 2010
    Place: Colegio de Dagupan Gymnasium, Dagupan City

    Topic: Teaching Srategies in Mathematics and Physics
    Date: December 5, 2009
    Place: AS-201, University of Pangasinan, Dagupan City

    Topic: Lectures-Seminar-Workshop in Number theory and Problem Solving Strategies
    Date: March 19-20, 2009
    Place: University of the Pangasinan Audio Visual Room, Dagupan City

    Topic: Learning Assessment
    Date: September 12, 2008
    Place: Nursing Review Room in the University of Pangasinan

    Personal Data:
    Date of Birth : May 13, 1990
    Civil Status : Single
    Height : 5’5”
    Weight : 110 lbs
    Skills : Good Communication and Listening Skills, and
    Proficient in MS Applications: MS word, MS excel, and
    MS PowerPoint.

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    xxxxxx
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    Re: Punctuation in my resume

    I don't see the need for full-stops after the three items in the Awards Received section.
    You use "Title" only in the first of the Topics of the seminars you have attended.
    I wouldn't put spaces before the colons in the personal data section, ad would probably use tab to make the spacing even.

    I wonder about maximising your university training- this suggests getting more out of it, while teaching suggests putting it to good use to me.

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