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    Dr.Sarrar is offline Newbie
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    Post complaining letter to the landlord

    hii teachers.. I am new her and i like the way of ur correction. I am doing my IELTS and wont some help in my writing

    this is an complaining letter to the landlord about some furnitures.

    Dear Mr. Smith,

    I am your tenant from Flat 2 on Palm street. We met each other when I sighned the rental agreement in your office.

    I have lived here for 6 monthes now and I am writing to complain about some furnitures in my flat. As you remember, the TV was in very poor condition when i recieved my keys apartment and it has a harmly noisy sound with improper images colors. As well as it shows vertical lines in the screen. You agree to provide a brand new TV at that time, However, you have not do so and I would really like to solve this matter as soon as possible.
    If it is more convenient for you, perhaps you could simply take the TV to the maintenance inorder to fixe it. This could solve the problem without much cost, so i hope you agree to this proposed solution.

    looking forward to hearing from you.
    your sincerely,
    SSD

    and I am looking forward for your correction

    Thanks
    Last edited by Dr.Sarrar; 16-Oct-2011 at 17:56. Reason: spelling

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    Dr.Sarrar is offline Newbie
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    Default Re: complaining letter to the landlord

    please I am waiting for anyone to correct my letter is it so bad like no one like to read !!

    Quote Originally Posted by Dr.Sarrar View Post
    hii teachers.. I am new her and i like the way of ur correction. I am doing my IELTS and wont some help in my writing

    this is an complaining letter to the landlord about some furnitures.

    Dear Mr. Smith,

    I am your tenant from Flat 2 on Palm street. We met each other when I sighned the rental agreement in your office.

    I have lived here for 6 monthes now and I am writing to complain about some furnitures in my flat. As you remember, the TV was in very poor condition when i recieved my keys apartment and it has a harmly noisy sound with improper images colors. As well as it shows vertical lines in the screen. You agree to provide a brand new TV at that time, However, you have not do so and I would really like to solve this matter as soon as possible.
    If it is more convenient for you, perhaps you could simply take the TV to the maintenance inorder to fixe it. This could solve the problem without much cost, so i hope you agree to this proposed solution.

    looking forward to hearing from you.
    your sincerely,
    SSD

    and I am looking forward for your correction

    Thanks

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