Dear teachers

Does the quoted piece of story bellow read well?

Yesterday night I was wondering where an ex girlfriend could be...
I searched her on facebook and found nothing.
I knew she had got married, had a boob job etc
Today destiny brought her to the library... she didn't recognise me
In fact, 10 years ago I was very skinny
Bottom line, I stared at her and the guy she was with saw the whole thing.
I got the hell out of there
The book I was reading, in English, suddenly turned into German...
So... my presence there was as pointless as a refrigerator in the North Pole...
Nevertheless, I could...
Thanks