First, we don't help with homework so you need to write the paragraph yourself first and we can then comment on it.Originally Posted by Madison;816849[COLOR=Red
Secondly, and no offence intended, you profile says that your native language is English. Is that correct? Please look at the amendments I have made to your post in red - mainly punctuation and capitalisation. Also, I'm really not sure that I even understand what it is you've been asked to do or what you've already done. What is "tell tale heart", for example?