Hi KristinaOriginally Posted by kristina_002;816917[COLOR=Red
Did you post your essays in this part of the forum? There is a section called "Editing and Writing Topics" where you can post whole essays.
How long were they? All the members here are volunteers and we only have a limited amount of time to help people. If you post a very long essay then many of us will look at it and decide that we can't devote an appropriate amount of time to it. We look at shorter questions to which we can provide short, snappy answers (hopefully!)
Please don't be disappointed. It might just be that the volunteers here have not had time to look properly at either of your posts.
Edit: I've just looked at your other posts. In the first, you basically asked us to do your work for you and Bhaisahab rightly told you we don't do that. Your other two posts aren't very long but they are very hard to read. In both of them, you have not used correct capitalisation (first letter of every sentence, every time you say "I") or spacing and punctuation. Perhaps you could go back to both your posts and edit them using those suggestions and then perhaps we will find them easier to read and advise.