Re: Please correct my letter
Thank you for attempting to assist, write2subhayu, byt please make sure that your corrections are correct:
Its is the correct form. It's is used only as a contracted for of it is/it has.
I tried to set
It is not necessary to use up.
In On the
third day, I called them up
I look forward to is fine. Hear is wrong - it must be hearing.
I look forward to hearing I am looking forward to hear
from you as soon as possible.
When the opener is Dear Sir, the closer is Yours faithfully, not Yours sincerely.
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