I've been required to work on a longform assignment(essay series) on Ender's Game. I'd like to get some proofing and critique as I write it(I still haven't finished it).

Here are the prompts:
https://viewer.zoho.com/docs/urlview...G%2520FORM.pdf

And here is the document it's self:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...hp_pyge8Y/edit


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Thank you so much to who ever may comment on my work, It's a WIP and I'd like to see what I can improve on!