vectra
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- Jun 16, 2005
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- English Teacher
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- Russian
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- Ukraine
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- Ukraine
Hello,
These are the lines from one of my students' home assignments in which she commented on the article http://http://tweentribune.com/content/surfing-official-school-sport-guess-where:
'Well, to my mind it's a great idea, the only drawback being a danger of injuring yourself. In general I always approve of new kinds of sport being implemented into a timetable. It's definitely more useful then just to be coach potatoes as a lot of students have got used to.'
I can't agree that 'implement' is the best choice, speaking about the student's comments.
She might have tried to use the word after reading this sentence from the article:
'The state Department of Education is working with the new appointed Board of Education on developing a plan to implement surfing.'
I would change the sentence into:
'In general I always approve of new kinds of sports being introduced into a curriculum.'
What do you think about it?
Thank you for the time and help.
These are the lines from one of my students' home assignments in which she commented on the article http://http://tweentribune.com/content/surfing-official-school-sport-guess-where:
'Well, to my mind it's a great idea, the only drawback being a danger of injuring yourself. In general I always approve of new kinds of sport being implemented into a timetable. It's definitely more useful then just to be coach potatoes as a lot of students have got used to.'
I can't agree that 'implement' is the best choice, speaking about the student's comments.
She might have tried to use the word after reading this sentence from the article:
'The state Department of Education is working with the new appointed Board of Education on developing a plan to implement surfing.'
I would change the sentence into:
'In general I always approve of new kinds of sports being introduced into a curriculum.'
What do you think about it?
Thank you for the time and help.
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