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I am a French student. I finished my studies in tourism and I am looking for a training period (internship?). Could you please help me to correct this letter? Thank you in advance
2 route des magnolias
16th November 2011
Dear Sir or Madam,
I address my application toPlease consider this letter as an application for a training period in your firm. I finished my studies in tourism. (You should state where you studied and some of the courses or curricula)
Before,Following my studies I more recently acquired many experiencesin depth experience in France, for example, atin the reception sectionof the intourism office orin agroup services. last year. My personality is very complete. I consider myself to be very personable, conscietious and I like to work in group. I enjoy meeting people and discoverlearning about other cultures. other daily of life. I conscientious at work.My last experience in la Rochelle, allowed me to take the initiative in different tasks (creating itinieries a journeyfor instance).I believe my qualifications would match your requirements.
this linguisticthe experience willwould be a spring board to the beginning toof my career in tourism.
Thank you for your time and consideration.