[Essay] Please help me look at these sentences.

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wanglili

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Hi, could anyone help me see if the following sentences are right and proper in language? Thanks!!

1. A large part of my suitability to teach literature lies in my ability to integrate my diverse interests and wide knowledge base with teaching.

2. According to my experience of learning foreign languages nevertheless, this lack of independent thinking is definitely an obstacle on the road to master a foreign language.

3. Meanwhile, observation in classrooms gave me the impression that students who used the most grammatical forms instead of the most appropriate ones got more praise than others.
 

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Thanks, Gil!
 
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