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    does this make sense

    More than 100 pages to read and re-read, with maximum informatics quality as well as an extensive regional coverage on key matters of the services that have mostly expanded and developed concerning the high speed access business. A true permanent consulting manual.

    Is this correctly written, open to suggestions

    thanks
    Miriam


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    #2

    Re: does this make sense

    it sounds good.


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    #3

    Re: does this make sense

    thank you very much ssendur


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    ".....developed concerning the high speed access business. A true permanent consulting manual."
    this last part sounds a little ambiguous because of reduction of a clause into a phrase.
    you may divide that sentence into two or use some conjunction words.
    you are welcome

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    #5

    Re: does this make sense

    Informatics?


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    Re: does this make sense

    what do you mean "informatics?"?

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