are these paragraghs correct?
A full description on the main local players, their competition as well as each country’s commercial tendency and its technologies
A complete overview of the business and its technical tendencies concerning:
An X-Ray of successful service operators within each technology and their opinions regarding equipments
it conccerns a translation from spanish to english, i would really appreciate your input or any advice on how to improve it. thanks
Last edited by danielkramer; 20-Oct-2005 at 01:06.
Reason: Are these paragraphs correct?
Which paragraphs? I cannot see a paragraph above. Do you mean sentences?