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    Food Poisoning

    Hi everyone, please I need your review about my essay

    Food Poisoning

    Food is one of the main elements of life. Humane being enjoy food and eat many different kinds of dishes; however, food sometimes can cause a different kinds of trouble for people as well. Food poisoning is the most common serious problem that food can cause, and it is divided into three main types.

    Bacterial food poisoning is the first type of food poisoning. It caused by a several types of bacteria such as: E. coli, salmonella and shigella. Those bacteria produce chemical substances (toxins) that are resistible for heating, and they cause a wide range of symptoms. From mild symptoms like nausea and vomiting to threaten symptoms like sever dehydration and even death. However we can save our health by paying more attention for sanitation and public hygiene.

    The second type of food poisoning is a chemical food poisoning, and it is mostly caused by the abuse of chemical compounds like insecticide. These compounds are absorbed very quickly in our body and cumulate in the nervous system. Victim could day in a few hours if he doesn’t receive medical care. In this type we need government effort to control insecticide usage.

    The third type is Non bacterial food poisoning and it more similar to the second one in mechanism and symptoms. But it differs in the origin of the chemical compounds. Here the chemical compounds come from natural resources. For examples: plant, mushroom and fish. And we ought to be aware about what we’re going to put in our mouth.

    In conclusion, bacterial, non bacterial and chemical food poisoning are very dangerous, can result in harmful effects in our body or even death. We better raise our awareness about them that way we will be able to save our and our family lives.


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    Re: Food Poisoning

    Hi. No answer, does that mean it is perfect or it is so bad?

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    Re: Food Poisoning

    Hello nasserph,

    Your essay reads well, although there are quite a few grammatical errors. Do you need these corrected?

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    Re: Food Poisoning

    Hi

    Yes Pleas.

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    Re: Food Poisoning

    Hope this helps!

    Food Poisoning


    Food is one of the main elements of life. Humane beings enjoy food, and eat many different kinds of dishes; however, food can sometimes cause a different kinds of trouble for people as well. Food poisoning is the most common and serious problem that food can cause., and It is divided into three main types: bacterial, chemical and non-bacterial.

    Bacterial food poisoning is the first type of food poisoning. It is caused by a several types of bacteria such as: E. coli, salmonella and shigella. These bacteria produce chemical substances (toxins) that are resistible for heatingheat resistant, and theycan cause a wide range of symptoms. From mild symptoms like nausea and vomiting to life threatening symptoms like severe dehydration and even death (is death a symptom?). However, we can save our health by paying more attention forto sanitation and public hygiene.

    The second type of food poisoning is a chemical food poisoning., andItThis type is mostly caused by the abuse of chemical compounds like insecticide. These compounds are absorbed very quickly in our body and cumulate in the nervous system. Victims could daycan die within in a few hours if he doesn’t they do not receive medical care. In this type we need government effort to control insecticide usage.

    The third type is Non bacterial food poisoning. and It is more similar to the second onechemical food poisoning in mechanism and symptoms, but it differs in the origin of theits chemical compounds. Here the chemical compounds come from natural resources, for examples: plants, mushrooms and fish. and We ought to be aware aboutof what we're(contractions are not usually used in formal writing)we are going to put in our mouths.

    In conclusion, bacterial, non bacterial and chemical food poisoning are very dangerous. They can result incause harmful effects into our bodies or even death. We need to better raise our awareness aboutof them so that way we will be able to save our own, and our families' lives.




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    Re: Food Poisoning

    Thank you a lot

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