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    Default Please modify

    We offer exclusive customized stitching options, dress materials & designer outfits as per your needs or request for customized designer outfit.
    Get yourself perfect fit, style & looks. All your needs from Indian wedding saree to Indo-western outfit under one roof.

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    Here's my take on this advertisement:

    We offer exclusive, customized stitching options, dress materials, and designer outfits to suit your needs. Request a tailored designer outfit and get the perfect style and fit. We have everything you need from Indian wedding saris to Indo-western outfits, all under one roof.
    Last edited by SlickVic9000; 22-Nov-2011 at 15:36.

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