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By the time they reached the top of the mountain, it was nearly dark and heavy snow was starting to fall. Mark and Richard had dreamed and scheduled this trip for several months and now that they finally
hadreached their destination, they felt so cheerful. Thus they were even forgetting for a moment the bad weather conditions that were breaking down on them. "We had better find a shelter for the night" Mark said worried.
In fact, it was very cold and dark. Therefore, the two friends decided to walk towards a little cave they had seen previously. Once inside, they were able to light a fire and eat something, hoping that the snowstorm would stop soon.
Fortunately, the following morning
afterthe storm had ceased. It was such a wonderful day, as the sun was shining in the skywithout a cloud in the sky.
As soon as Mark and Richard came out from their refuge, they caught sight of the hill entirely covered with snow. Thus, after having enjoyed this moment, they got back home happy.
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