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All individuals are at risk of developing skin cancer. However, there are groups, most notably outdoor workers, which are at greater risk than others. This [STRIKE]seems quite likely[/STRIKE] is understandable considering the substantial amount of time they spend exposed to UVR - at least 30 hours per week. Furthermore, this exposure is approximately 6 to 8 times greater [STRIKE]compared with[/STRIKE] than indoor workers.

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