vectra
Member
- Joined
- Jun 16, 2005
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Russian
- Home Country
- Ukraine
- Current Location
- Ukraine
Hello,
This is a memo submitted by one of my students:
To: All staff
From: Juan Carlos Sapertero
Date: 24th October
Subject: Changes in security procedures
As you know, we [STRIKE]faced with[/STRIKE] ran into some problems last month. Very important documents were stolen, [STRIKE]this situation damaged[/STRIKE] as a result our reputation has been damaged. We [STRIKE]were[/STRIKE] are forced to improve our security procedures.[STRIKE] not to get into trouble once more.[/STRIKE] Read the new rules please.
All staff will [STRIKE]have[/STRIKE]be issued special ID cards. You are [STRIKE]can[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]take it[/STRIKE] to collect them in [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] room №256[STRIKE], where you will meet security guards[/STRIKE]. These cards must be with you all time, as security will check ID on entry. [STRIKE]If somebody wants to visit you[/STRIKE]in case you have a visitor, you should [STRIKE]give them[/STRIKE] apply for a temporary ID card, as all visitors must be signed in/out. Don`t forget to lock offices when you [STRIKE]are[/STRIKE] leave[STRIKE]ing[/STRIKE] them! [STRIKE]Shake a leg, we must act as fast as possible.[/STRIKE]
If anyone has further questions about [STRIKE]above[/STRIKE] the new security procedure, my door is always open. [STRIKE]Don`t hesitate.[/STRIKE]
JC
What do you think about my corrections?
Thank you for the time and help.
This is a memo submitted by one of my students:
To: All staff
From: Juan Carlos Sapertero
Date: 24th October
Subject: Changes in security procedures
As you know, we [STRIKE]faced with[/STRIKE] ran into some problems last month. Very important documents were stolen, [STRIKE]this situation damaged[/STRIKE] as a result our reputation has been damaged. We [STRIKE]were[/STRIKE] are forced to improve our security procedures.[STRIKE] not to get into trouble once more.[/STRIKE] Read the new rules please.
All staff will [STRIKE]have[/STRIKE]be issued special ID cards. You are [STRIKE]can[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]take it[/STRIKE] to collect them in [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] room №256[STRIKE], where you will meet security guards[/STRIKE]. These cards must be with you all time, as security will check ID on entry. [STRIKE]If somebody wants to visit you[/STRIKE]in case you have a visitor, you should [STRIKE]give them[/STRIKE] apply for a temporary ID card, as all visitors must be signed in/out. Don`t forget to lock offices when you [STRIKE]are[/STRIKE] leave[STRIKE]ing[/STRIKE] them! [STRIKE]Shake a leg, we must act as fast as possible.[/STRIKE]
If anyone has further questions about [STRIKE]above[/STRIKE] the new security procedure, my door is always open. [STRIKE]Don`t hesitate.[/STRIKE]
JC
What do you think about my corrections?
Thank you for the time and help.