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    Is this sentence correct ?

    Dear all,


    Is this sentence correct ?


    The demands of the globalization era have placed information as a very influencing resource. This globalization context is also unavoidable in the development of the national education policy that must be understood by university students, abroad scholars.


    Many thanks

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    Re: Is this sentence correct ?

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    I didn't exactly understand where you were going with this, but I gave it a shot anyway:

    "The demands of globalization have made information a critical resource. The context of globalization is also unavoidable in the development of a national education policy, which must be understood by university students and scholars abroad."


    The second sentence does not seem to flow from the first sentence at all. What's your thesis?

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    Re: Is this sentence correct ?

    Thanks for your answer

    Thesis title : globalization and education in the Information Technology era

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