DunceAnni
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Hi, this is my first post and I rarely use internet forums as I'm not fond of IT - so my apologies in advance.
Please give your thoughts on the following sentence which appears on a friend's website which he insists is correct ( probably rightly so!).
"Exquisitely tasting and full of all the natural fluids, vitamins, nutrients, sugars, minerals and salts demanded and needed by everyone of all age groups."
To me, it just doesn't seem to work. I feel there is something amiss with the grammar. Especially the beginning of the sentence. Anybody like to shed some light or offer an opinion.
Thank you for reading this!
Anni
(Certified Dunce!)
Please give your thoughts on the following sentence which appears on a friend's website which he insists is correct ( probably rightly so!).
"Exquisitely tasting and full of all the natural fluids, vitamins, nutrients, sugars, minerals and salts demanded and needed by everyone of all age groups."
To me, it just doesn't seem to work. I feel there is something amiss with the grammar. Especially the beginning of the sentence. Anybody like to shed some light or offer an opinion.
Thank you for reading this!
Anni
(Certified Dunce!)