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Dear all,
Is " in contrast/ in the other hand" really essential after "whereas" in this sentence ?
Doctors’ salaries have risen substantially, whereas in contrast/ in the other hand nurses’ pay has actually fallen.
Is there any meaning difference if the " in contrast/ in the other hand" is deleted ?
Is extra " in contrast/ in the other hand" making the sentence wordy ?
Many thanks
Is " in contrast/ in the other hand" really essential after "whereas" in this sentence ?
Doctors’ salaries have risen substantially, whereas in contrast/ in the other hand nurses’ pay has actually fallen.
Is there any meaning difference if the " in contrast/ in the other hand" is deleted ?
Is extra " in contrast/ in the other hand" making the sentence wordy ?
Many thanks