Could you check these sentences I wrote below and tell me how it sounds?
--More specifically, I have been struggling to fit the underlined phrase into the paragraph, but so far, have not been able to do so.
Thanks for your help.
I thought about fleeing to another city with my kids without him knowing but it seemed almost impossible. The school transfer for my kids alone required, unless I was a sole custodian of my kids, the approval of their father, not to mention the record of transfer which would be left in the register of the previous school unless I decided not to send them to school.
Last edited by rainous; 19-Dec-2011 at 07:57.
Thank you so much for your kind words and the suggestion which I think is superb.