In future, please start a new thread if you have a fresh question. Adding your question to threads already started can lead to possibly confusing answers. Please also try to give your threads a title that gives us some idea of what you are asking about. I have moved your question to a new thread, and given it a title.
You may receive hellpful responses here.
Here are a few pointers about writing:
1. Always use a capital letter at the beginning of a sentence, for the first person pronoun 'I' and for proper nouns, languages and adjectives of nationality.
2. Leave a space after a punctuation mark