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    Default Need Paragraph Correction

    Hi Teachers,
    Could you correct this paragraph that I rewrote please?
    It’s 11 o’clock. Susan is talking to Tom. He is phoning from Paris. Are you having a good time? What’s the weather like? Is it raining? she wants to know.
    Frank and his wife are getting ready for bed. He can hear Susan downstairs. Who’s she talking to? Is she still talking to Tom? he wants to know.
    Yes Frank, she is still talking to Tom. Come on be a good boy and sleep. is his wife’s answer.

    Thanks in advance
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    Default Re: Need Paragraph Correction

    'Come on - be a good boy and go to sleep' is his wife's answer.
    The rest is fine.

    Rover

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    Default Re: Need Paragraph Correction

    Quote Originally Posted by Rover_KE View Post
    The rest is fine.

    Rover
    Hi,
    Thank you very much for your reply.

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