I'm beginning to study writing, so would anyone please check three following paragraphs for me?
There is a table with some objects on it. The
objects are for the office or for school. There
is a pencil, an eraser, a ruler, a pencil
sharpener and some paper.
This is a cocktail party with lots of people.
There are three men and three women.
They'reThey are all friends and are having fun. They
are talking and laughing a lot.
clinking their glasses and saying 'Cheers!'.
There are three women in the street.
They are thin and pretty. (Or: perhaps better “slim” – “thin” means people who might weigh less than they should)
There is a blond woman,
a woman with fair hair and a woman with
brown hair. They look happy. They
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