khanhhung2512
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Hi everyone.
I'm beginning to study writing, so would anyone please check three following paragraphs for me?
Thanks very much!
I'm beginning to study writing, so would anyone please check three following paragraphs for me?
Code:
There is a table with some objects on it. The
objects are for the office or for school. There
is a pencil, an eraser, a ruler, a pencil
sharpener and some paper.
Code:
This is a cocktail party with lots of people.
There are three men and three women.
They're all friends and are having fun. There
are talking and laughing a lot. They're
clinking their glasses and saying 'Cheers!'.
Code:
There are three women in the street. They
are thin and pretty. There is a blond woman,
a woman with fair hair and a woman with
brown hair. They look happy. They have
shopping bags.
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