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    1- Come spring , day and night will be pleasant .

    2-More crucial is a distinction between what I call internalized and externalized responsibility.

    3-She daily showers her baby.

    4- What is your most watched movie ?

    5- They daily transport our company raw materials.

    Please do correction.

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    In future, please start a new thread for each different question. It can become confusing if people respond to different questions in one thread.
    Quote Originally Posted by onkar View Post
    1- Come spring , day and night will be pleasant .
    Grammatically fine, but unnatural. We'd probably say something like "Come spring/When spring comes, the temperature/weather will be pleasant at night as well as during the day".

    2-More crucial is a distinction between what I call internalized and externalized responsibility. Fine

    3-She daily showers her baby daily/every day..

    4- What is your most watched movie ? What is the movie you watch most?

    5- They daily transport our company raw materials. This is not a sentence.
    Please do not edit your question after it has received a response. Such editing can make the response hard for others to understand.


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    Sir
    These are the most bought Items .(You said it is right)

    It is the most watched movie . (why is it wrong ?)
    From above
    I used
    What is your most watched/seen movie ? (Is this also wrong)

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    [QUOTE=onkar;836199]
    What is your most- watched movie ? (Is this also wrong)

    I also want to know.



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    Quote Originally Posted by onkar View Post
    These are the most bought Items .(You said it is right) I didn't.

    It is the most watched movie . (why is it wrong ?) I didn't say that that was wrong. You asked about 'your most watched movie'.

    What is your most watched/seen movie ? (Is this also wrong)
    What is your most watched movie?" is, in most contexts, unnatural.
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