Please need letter correction

[learning54]

Hi teachers,
Could you correct this letter please?
I would like to ask how much you would charge for an hour. If we can come to an agreement, the classes can start on January 17. They would be on Tuesdays and Thursdays from 2:00 - 3:30. You've told me that you are free only on Mondays and Fridays from 2:00 - 3:30, is that so even now? If yes, I will try to change the schedule to these days.

Thanks in advance

 

[emsr2d2]

Hi teachers,
Could you correct this letter please?

I would like to ask how much you [STRIKE]would[/STRIKE] charge for an hour (or "charge per hour"). If we can come to an agreement, the classes [STRIKE]can[/STRIKE] would start on January 17. They would be on Tuesdays and Thursdays from 2:00 - 3:30. [STRIKE]You've[/STRIKE] You told me that you are free only on Mondays and Fridays from 2:00 - 3:30. Is that [STRIKE]so even now[/STRIKE] still the case? If [STRIKE]yes[/STRIKE] so, I will try to change the [STRIKE]schedule[/STRIKE] classes to [STRIKE]these[/STRIKE] those days.

Thanks in advance

See above.

 

[learning54]

See above.

Hi,
Thank you so much. I've got quite a few mistakes.

Best,
Learning