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    a writing to check please

    topic: some students like to attend a large university that has many
    students ,others prefer to attend a small university that has fewer
    students ,which type of university do you prefer ? use specific
    reasons ans examples to support your answer
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    After attending high school diplomate students usually apply for
    an university .There are a lot of kinds of universities with a
    different number of students .What's the best,a large one with a huge
    number of students or a small one with a fewer number of students ?
    For me a prefer to study in a university with a small number of
    students where the environement of understanding and being understood
    is present.More than that,communication between students and
    professors is more accessible than we can see in a large university
    with a huge number of students .Moreover, students usually aren't
    abhored by university's presure and they feel more dynamic .i'd like
    to study in an university with a small number of students where the
    environement is accessible.however, many students prefer to continue
    their study in a large university with a huge number of students .
    In spite of being less undertood,students chose this kind of
    university which is large with a huge number of students .More than
    that , this kind of universities isn't able to cover all the students
    and survey them .Moreover, this kind has a lot of groups with a
    different relegions which attribute many conflicts and racial abuses
    with students themselves.Aforementioned many students apply for this
    kind of universities regardless its disadvantages .
    Every students try to apply for an university where the
    environement is accessible for him to continue his study in a good
    condition.

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    Re: a writing to check please

    an university- a university (the sound is not a vowel sund- compare the sound with 'umbrella')
    with a different number- different numbers
    For me a prefer to study- I prefer (you could also delete 'for me')
    where the environement of understanding and being understood
    is present- where there is an environment of understanding
    communication between students and professors is more accessible than we can- I'd say 'communcation between students and professors is easier that in a large university
    students usually aren't abhored by university's presure- abhored s wrong- how about students are not under the pressures of a large university
    students chose- choose
    this kind of universities- university
    with a different relegions which attribute many conflicts- with different religions which cause...
    racial abuses with students- racial tensions /problems among students
    Aforementioned- As mentioned
    regardless- of
    Every students try- Every student tries
    in a good condition- in a good environment


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    Re: a writing to check please

    thanks a lot friend i'm very happy for your help

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    Re: a writing to check please

    You're welcome.

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