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    Please need story correction (Unit 3)

    Hi Teachers,
    I rewrote these short stories, could you correct them please? Any suggestions are more than welcome. They are for low intermediate students.

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    Arthur often goes to London. He is going there today and he went there yesterday, too. Now he is talking to an old friend. His name is Alan.

    Alan: Does this train usually arrive on time?

    Arthur: Yes, it does, but it didnít yesterday. It arrived late!

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    Now Arthur is back from London. He went there this morning. Deborah is at the train station to meet him.

    Deborah: Did you have a good time in London?

    Arthur: Yes, I did, and I met an old friend on the train this morning.

    Deborah: Did the train get into London on time?

    Arthur: No, it didnít. It was late again!

    Thanks in advance
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    Re: Please need story correction (Unit 3)

    They are fine, grammatically.

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    Re: Please need story correction (Unit 3)

    Quote Originally Posted by 5jj View Post
    They are fine, grammatically.
    Hi sir,
    Thank you very much for your reply and time.

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