Could you correct this story that I rewrote please? Is there a way to include the words 'bride' and 'groom' in this story? If there is, I'll appreciate very much if you could use those words inside the story.
Tom and Susan got married yesterday morning. They had a wedding party yesterday afternoon with a lot of friends. Susanís parents were there and so were Tomís. Almost everybody drank champagne, ate cake, and had a good time. Only Tomís mother did not eat or drink very much because she became very emotional at the wedding party. Susanís father made a terrific speech.
Thanks in advance
Last edited by learning54; 28-Dec-2011 at 17:02.