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I see something wrong with the sentence below. I have written this in an article I am currently working on.
There sure is tech savvy crowd among first lot of five hundred who bought <product> without causing big dent in their wallet.
Here five hundred means lot of <products> and not people. How do I rephrase it?
The people who bought the first five hundred without causing a dent in their wallets certainly included a number of tech savvy people. I am not sure about the relevance of the words I have underlined.
I know the expression; it just didn't seem relevant to the sentence as a whole.