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    Post Anyone helps me to correct the introduction of my paper

    Hi teachers
    I have no confidence in the following paragraphs I wrote. Could you please help me to correct them? Thank you in advance.

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    Any help will be appreciated.

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    Could anyone help me?

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    Re: Anyone helps me to correct the introduction of my paper

    Please be patient. When you posted your request initially, many members were in bed.

    This is not a free proofreading service. Volunteer members help when/if they can, and if they have time.

    Your paper is very technical, and there may well be few members who feel confident enough to undertake the task.

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    Re: Anyone helps me to correct the introduction of my paper

    Quote Originally Posted by 5jj View Post
    Please be patient. When you posted your request initially, many members were in bed.

    This is not a free proofreading service. Volunteer members help when/if they can, and if they have time.

    Your paper is very technical, and there may well be few members who feel confident enough to undertake the task.
    Thank you for your reminder.
    I will wait patiently.
    You let me see the hope!
    Thank you again.

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    Re: Anyone helps me to correct the introduction of my paper

    To be honest, this text is so specialised that you should take it to a professional proofreader of scientific texts.

    The horizontal salinity gradient is thekey driving force for the estuarine circulation, which in turn plays a key role in maintaining salinity stratification in estuaries.
    For example, here, I can tell you confidently to put a space in thekey, and less confidently that I would probably put the before salinity stratification, but little more. This is a job for someone with a grounding in the area.

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    Re: Anyone helps me to correct the introduction of my paper

    Quote Originally Posted by Tdol View Post
    To be honest, this text is so specialised that you should take it to a professional proofreader of scientific texts.


    For example, here, I can tell you confidently to put a space in thekey, and less confidently that I would probably put the before salinity stratification, but little more. This is a job for someone with a grounding in the area.
    Thank you for your help.
    Maybe you thought your advice is little, but for me it is really big.
    Last edited by dut_thinker; 03-Jan-2012 at 03:01.

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