Re: my fisrt novel? please tell me how well it is written
Sorry, but the answer is an emphatic No.
Originally Posted by AMK-future writer
My profession is teaching and my hobby is grammar. I am not a proofreader, amateur or professional. You need English lessons before you go any further with your novel, and you will need a proofreader after you have written it. You will need to pay a professional for both services.
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