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    georgevi is offline Newbie
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    Red face Please help me to correct

    Please help me to correct every thing


    I have a test soon


    About writing, and the question is:



    What do u think about uniform in school?


    I wrote this ,, please help me to correct it



    The subject of uniforms is interesting. In my opinion, I think it’s a good idea because students will feel like a team working together. Also it helps parents when they buy clothes for New Year. In addition, it decreases the amount of confusion students face when choosing clothes. Moreover, uniforms are easy to find for poor people, because a lot of shops sell them. Actually, students should think about education more than designer clothes worn by famous people. If some students don't accept them, we can change their mind by explaining the importance of wearing a uniform. In summary, I hope our students accept the idea for many reasons, for example, to save money to help our family. Finally, we should do our best to realize success.





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    georgevi is offline Newbie
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    Default Re: Please help me to correct

    thank you my friend

    It was most generous of you to help me

    I wish you the best of luck

    Enjoy


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