georgevi
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- Joined
- Jan 5, 2012
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- Student or Learner
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- Arabic
- Home Country
- Bahrain
- Current Location
- Bahrain
Please help me to correct every thing
I have a test soon:-|
About writing, and the question is:
What do u think about uniform in school?
I wrote this ,, please help me to correct it
The subject of uniforms is interesting. In my opinion, I think it’s a good idea because students will feel like a team working together. Also it helps parents when they buy clothes for New Year. In addition, it decreases the amount of confusion students face when choosing clothes. Moreover, uniforms are easy to find for poor people, because a lot of shops sell them. Actually, students should think about education more than designer clothes worn by famous people. If some students don't accept them, we can change their mind by explaining the importance of wearing a uniform. In summary, I hope our students accept the idea for many reasons, for example, to save money to help our family. Finally, we should do our best to realize success.
I'm waiting help
I have a test soon:-|
About writing, and the question is:
What do u think about uniform in school?
I wrote this ,, please help me to correct it
The subject of uniforms is interesting. In my opinion, I think it’s a good idea because students will feel like a team working together. Also it helps parents when they buy clothes for New Year. In addition, it decreases the amount of confusion students face when choosing clothes. Moreover, uniforms are easy to find for poor people, because a lot of shops sell them. Actually, students should think about education more than designer clothes worn by famous people. If some students don't accept them, we can change their mind by explaining the importance of wearing a uniform. In summary, I hope our students accept the idea for many reasons, for example, to save money to help our family. Finally, we should do our best to realize success.
I'm waiting help
