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This is an IELTS writing article. Could you please correct my English? Thank you in advance!
Topic:
Most people think that teachers should teach students how to judge right and wrong and how to behave well. Some feel that people should just teach students academic subject. Please discuss these two views and give your opinion. Please give relevant cases or experience.
Essay:
There is a debate on whether teachers should only teach students academic knowledge provided by book. And lot of people hold the opinion that teachers also have the responsibility of teaching students judge right and wrong. Personally, an outstanding education could not exist without giving students moral teaching.
There is no doubt that teachers’ major duty is impart knowledge which will enable students to complete their job. But the ability to judge right and wrong is equally helpful in their future working. Some people go to extreme to claim, teachers need not to teach anything that do not concern the academic knowledge. In fact, you could not blame a teacher who has imparted all the things included in book, for it is their entire job comes in light.
A staff will not be fired if he had accomplished its own job, but staffs who love their jobs will do better than just OK. Students will have more competitive strength and do more contribution for society if their teachers teach them how to behavior better. Furthermore the judgment of right and wrong will urge them be good and honest. It is not a strange thing that the people have highly technical knowledge become the villain. Could you honestly say “this have no relation of the education”?
We could not blame teacher who just teach the academic knowledge, but an excellent education must give more than it. School is not only a place to sell knowledge but “produce” people have correct values and world outlook.
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Topic:
Most people think that teachers should teach students how to judge right and wrong and how to behave well. Some feel that people should just teach students academic subject. Please discuss these two views and give your opinion. Please give relevant cases or experience.
Essay:
There is a debate on whether teachers should only teach students academic knowledge provided by book. And lot of people hold the opinion that teachers also have the responsibility of teaching students judge right and wrong. Personally, an outstanding education could not exist without giving students moral teaching.
There is no doubt that teachers’ major duty is impart knowledge which will enable students to complete their job. But the ability to judge right and wrong is equally helpful in their future working. Some people go to extreme to claim, teachers need not to teach anything that do not concern the academic knowledge. In fact, you could not blame a teacher who has imparted all the things included in book, for it is their entire job comes in light.
A staff will not be fired if he had accomplished its own job, but staffs who love their jobs will do better than just OK. Students will have more competitive strength and do more contribution for society if their teachers teach them how to behavior better. Furthermore the judgment of right and wrong will urge them be good and honest. It is not a strange thing that the people have highly technical knowledge become the villain. Could you honestly say “this have no relation of the education”?
We could not blame teacher who just teach the academic knowledge, but an excellent education must give more than it. School is not only a place to sell knowledge but “produce” people have correct values and world outlook.
(253 words)