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    chiko is offline Newbie
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    Hi all members of this forum , iam new and I really need to learn english through this forum, my english is not very good. Two moths ago I have completed my degree study and I have decided to write a letter to my employer to inform him and submit my transcript.The following is letter so help me to edit.

    Dear Manager,

    RE: SUBMITTION OF MY ACADEMIC TRANSCIPT

    Please the heading above refer,

    I am pleased to inform you that I have successful completed my Bachelor Degree in Pschylogy at St John Univerisity. I would like thank you so much for your support during my study. your support is highly appreciated.
    I have submitted my academic transcript for your further steps.
    Thanks again for your time and consideration.
    yours faithfully,
    chiko.

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    Default Re: please help to edit my letter

    [QUOTE=chiko;843245]Hi all members of this forum , iam new and I really need to learn english through this forum, my english is not very good. Two moths ago I have completed my degree study and I have decided to write a letter to my employer to inform him and submit my transcript.The following is letter so help me to edit.

    Dear Manager, (better to address Mr xxx)

    RE: SUBMITTION OF MY ACADEMIC TRANSCIPT
    Submission of Academic Transcript (don't use all block letters)
    Please the heading above refer,

    I am pleased to inform you that I have successfully completed my Bachelor Degree in Pschylogy at St John Univerisity. I would like to thank you so much for your support during my study and I greatly appreciate it.. your support is highly appreciated.

    I have submitted attach herewith my academic transcript for your further steps. action/perusal.

    Thanks again for your time and consideration.

    Yours faithfully,
    Chiko.

    You should know that certain letters like the first letter in a sentence and your name are to be capitalized.
    Don't be stingy with space in a letter.

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    chiko is offline Newbie
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    Default Re: please help to edit my letter

    Oh thanks very much Tedtmc for your support

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