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    Default My winter holiday - Please correct my narative

    During the winter holiday we can sleep and stay up as long as we want to.Honestly, this is what I did the whole holiday. I've been sleeping from 2 AM to 12 PM. This year I spent my winter holiday with my relatives and family, but it was fun. I had a great time with my three cousins and my brother. Unfortunately, this year I haven't went caroling because I thought it would be too boring. Also, Santa was pretty free-handed this year.
    I celebrated the New Year with some of my classmates and a few friends. We went to the downtown to hear the countdown and see the fireworks and then we want back to my place where we partied until 2 AM.
    To my shame, I starting preparing for school just a few days until it started, but I got an excuse: the holiday was to relaxing to start learning.
    My holiday was exciting and full of joy.

    May someone, please, correct this narative ?
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    Default Re: My winter holiday - Please correct my narative

    Over the winter holiday we can sleep and stay up as long as we want. Honestly, this is exactly what I did the entire time. I slept from 2 AM to 12 PM. This year I spent my winter holiday with my relatives and family, but it was fun. I had a great time with my three cousins and my brother. Unfortunately, this year I did not go caroling because I thought it would be too boring. Also, Santa was pretty free-handed. (what does free handed mean?)
    I celebrated the New Year with some of my classmates and a few friends. We went downtown to hear the countdown and see the fireworks, and then we went back to my place where we partied until 2 AM.
    To my shame, I starting preparing for school only a few days before it started. However, I had an excuse: the holiday was too relaxing to start learning so soon.
    My holiday was exciting and full of joy.

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    Default Re: My winter holiday - Please correct my narative

    Thank you very much !

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