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    Can you correct the following sentences?

    I like Jisu on TV show named superstar K 2. Jisu's best song is 'Friday'. Her voice is very wonderful.

    Today I am going to see my friend. We are going to drink alchole. Because I had lived in Seoul, we haven't seen each other for a long time. I couldn't contact anyone while I thought of my job and future because I was so blue and confused. But my friend understood my situation. I felt very thanksful for my friend. One of my friends who lived in Seoul told me that she is going to go on a business trip to Changwon City. When I heard that I was throbbing with expectation. I really miss a friend but we lived so far from each other. We couldn't meet often. If she doesn't have time to see me when she is in Changwon, that's ok. I will go to Seoul to see her.

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    Re: Can you correct the following sentences?

    I like Jisu on TV show named superstar K 2. Jisu's best song is 'Friday'. Her voice is very wonderful.

    Today I am going to see my friend. We are going to drink alchole. Because I hadhave lived in Seoul, we haven't seen each other for a long time. I couldn't contact anyone while I thought of my job and future because I was so blue and confused. But my friend understood my situation. I felt very thanksful for to my friend. One of my friends who lived in Seoul told me that she is was going to go on a business trip to Changwon City. When I heard that I was throbbing with expectation. I really miss a friend but we lived so far from each other. We couldn't meet often. If she doesn't have time to see me when she is in Changwon, that's ok. I will go to Seoul to see her.

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