Re: Motivation letter to Universities and Extended Essay Advice
Welcome to the forum, Banu.
We like to help when we can, but we are not a letter-writing service. If you write your letter, and post it here: Editing & Writing Topics, somebody will probably correct it and give you advice. However, the people who do this work do it as volunteers in their free time, so you may have to be a little patient.
Good luck with your university application.
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