Dr.Sarrar
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Please correct my essay. I am applying for IELTS general module I field twice!! I really need to improve my writing and I need your help. Thanks
What are the advantages and disadvantages of increasing tourism activity in different countries?
Tourism has been considered as an important industry field. Many efforts have introduced by the governments to improve the tourism. Thereby, the international travel fares are significantly decreasing and tourism is nourishing. As any phenomenon, Tourism does had advantages and disadvantages that will be analyzed in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, tourism is considered as a key to the intercultural understanding and languages interchange. For example, many people are traveling to US or UK to learn English language from the native English speakers. In addition, tourism opens the gate for different cultures. Thus, encourage the nation communication and produce business rode between the various countries. The cultural exchange between Europe and Arabian countries in the educational field is the good example of positive
effect of tourism.
Moreover, I am convincing that tourism play an essential role in shedding the unemployment. When the international tourism industry was nourishing, the economic industry was beneficial. Consequently, the vocation opportunities were increased.
On the other hand, the international tourism does pose some disadvantages. For one, tourists come with different cultures and principles which are in contrast with the native nations. To explain more, these principles could be opposite to the native nation thoughts or to their religion. I believe that this issue is an obvious disadvantage to the growing global travel industry.
As a conclusion, I intend that the falling travel prices are making the tourism more possible. It is purely felt tourism has more benefits than drawback. It improves all different industry fields and promotes the international communication between the different nations.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of increasing tourism activity in different countries?
Tourism has been considered as an important industry field. Many efforts have introduced by the governments to improve the tourism. Thereby, the international travel fares are significantly decreasing and tourism is nourishing. As any phenomenon, Tourism does had advantages and disadvantages that will be analyzed in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, tourism is considered as a key to the intercultural understanding and languages interchange. For example, many people are traveling to US or UK to learn English language from the native English speakers. In addition, tourism opens the gate for different cultures. Thus, encourage the nation communication and produce business rode between the various countries. The cultural exchange between Europe and Arabian countries in the educational field is the good example of positive
effect of tourism.
Moreover, I am convincing that tourism play an essential role in shedding the unemployment. When the international tourism industry was nourishing, the economic industry was beneficial. Consequently, the vocation opportunities were increased.
On the other hand, the international tourism does pose some disadvantages. For one, tourists come with different cultures and principles which are in contrast with the native nations. To explain more, these principles could be opposite to the native nation thoughts or to their religion. I believe that this issue is an obvious disadvantage to the growing global travel industry.
As a conclusion, I intend that the falling travel prices are making the tourism more possible. It is purely felt tourism has more benefits than drawback. It improves all different industry fields and promotes the international communication between the different nations.
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