Re: TOEFL ESSAY
Welcome to the forum, bhapi.
Originally Posted by bhapi
One thing you can do is to practise writng English correctly at all times. As SoothingDave wrote, that includes using capitalization and punctuation properly. It also means thinking carefully about what you are writing. Look at the corrections I have made in your post.
You can post samples of your writing here, Editing & Writing Topics, for comment and correction.
Please do not edit your question after it has received a response. Such editing can make the response hard for others to understand.