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    rosagold is offline Newbie
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    Default Is this correct?

    Please correct this text.
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    I like this picture very much! I like the tree as it appears like a shade. I think that these kinds of photos can be very lovely! It's like a game with the light. You are the referee, and you are who decides, what the light should do and how to appear.
    I also like that big cloud, how majestic could be! But it's also fierce.
    Although, the whole picture shows a hopeful image of something splendid. It shows how wonderful the nature could be. And it's true, the nature is amazing! It renews every year, and that is fantastic. :)

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    Default Re: Is this correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by rosagold View Post
    Please correct this text.
    Thank you.

    I like this picture very much! I like the tree. as It appears like a shade. I think that these kinds of photos can be very lovely! It's like a game with the light. You are the referee, and you are the one who decides what the light should do and how to it should appear.
    I also like that big cloud. How majestic could be it is! But it's also fierce.
    Although, The whole picture shows a hopeful image of something splendid. It shows how wonderful the nature could be. And it's true. the Nature is amazing! It renews every year, and that is fantastic. :)
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