A much better alternative!
Could you please help? Mainly with the second paragraph.
Dear Dr. ,
Thank you again for your interest and your good words.
I did what I allowed to do by the limited time for securing my scholarship and the prospect of studying with you.
I will keep you informed on any progress regarding the Greek State Scholarships Foundation and the admission from the University of Tennessee. These days I am studying intensively for the fall semester exams. I will consider detailed any arising options later, after the end of the exams on February 17.
My effort for admission from the University of Tennessee was a very good chance in order for me to begin to improve my English. I will continue that.
I am glad that I shared with you my dreams and I would be happy to keep contact with you via E-mail or Skype.