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    Default Need professional opinion, please

    hello everyone, I ma writing headlines for an article which do u think would be best:

    Cablemódem tendencies:
    cable modem development success case, by .......
    or
    Cablemódem tendencies:
    Success case in the development of cablemodem, by ...........

    and on the first one shouldn`t it be:

    Cablemódem tendencies:
    cable-modem`s development success case, by .......

    i would like to know your opnion and if the "`s" is needed

    i really appreciate it.
    thank you very much.
    Daniel

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    Cable Modem Trends: a Success Story

    ???

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    Default Re: Need professional opinion, please

    Tdol

    thanks for your reply, but the person that needs it, wants it in two sentences

    Cablemódem tendencies:
    cable modem development success case, by .......
    or
    Cablemódem tendencies:
    Success case in the development of cablemodem, by
    or
    Cablemódem tendencies:
    cablemodem`s development success case, by .......

    any opnion on which would be better?
    daniel

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    Default Re: Need professional opinion, please

    The second, though I would use 'trends' instead of 'tendencies'.

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    tdol

    thank you very much.

    daniel

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