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    Default How is my writing style?

    In our modern day world of high stakes, higher decibel levels, pressing
    schedules, fierce competition and shrinking attention spans, only the
    most attractive, innovative, persuasive and powerful packaging can get
    undivided attention.

    Not everyone has the time, patience, creativity and talent to do what it
    takes to be heard and noticed but everyone has a compelling need to
    put their best foot forward.


    I would appreciate if you point out any mistakes, if at all present
    Regards,

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    Default Re: How is my writing style?

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post

    Your writing is fine.

    I would appreciate it if you would point out any mistakes. if at all present
    Regards,
    Rover

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    Default Re: How is my writing style?

    [QUOTE=new2grammar;851457]


    ***** NOT A TEACHER *****


    New2Grammar,

    (1) I agree with the teacher: your writing is awesome!

    (2) I do not wish to nitpick (complain about little, unimportant things), but I

    feel that I should bring two little matters to your attention:

    (a) Some people would prefer a hyphen:

    In our modern-day world ....

    (i) Some might even advise dropping "day": In our modern world ....

    (b) Some people would feel more comfortable with a comma:

    ...and noticed, but everyone has ....

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