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    Default Please explain in simple english

    Please explain following text in simple or easy english.

    The coming together by apparent chance, of factors that are not causally linked but that nevertheless show themselves to be meaningfully related is at the very heart of the process by which the purpose of an individual's life unfolds and becomes his "fate". Call it Sanjog or synchronicity, it all happens through divine intervention.
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    The coming together by apparent chance, of factors that are not causally linked but that nevertheless show themselves to be meaningfully related is at the very heart of the process by which the purpose of an individual's life unfolds and becomes his "fate". Call it Sanjog or synchronicity, it all happens through divine intervention.

    There are several factors.
    They are not related causally (None of them is the reason why the other one is there).
    But these factors are beautifully related.
    God decides when and how these factors come together.
    The individual's fate depends on these factors coming together.
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    This is completely unrelated to the question, but this sentence does not flow well at all. I'd write it like this:

    "The coming together of factors that are not causally linked, but are nevertheless meaningfully related, is the process by which the purpose of an individual's life unfolds and becomes his 'fate'."

    That sounds much better to me.

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    Gentlemen, thank you very much for solving my problem.

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