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    Default Please Review & correct

    dear all,
    this is a letter to teacher from a parent .please rewiew & correct.

    "Dear teacher,
    Sub: Missing school diary & costume for open day for Afrin
    Good morning,
    Hope you are doing well.
    With reference to the above subject I would like to inform you that Afrin missed her school diary yesterday. So could you please check whether it find somewhere in the classroom.
    We already purchased all the costumes as you advised & sending with her today. It includes frock, gloves, stockings, chain & stud. Butterfly wings we are not sending because it may damage. Please check the costumes and send us a feed back

    Yours sincerely,''

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    Post Re: Please Review & correct

    Quote Originally Posted by lostworld View Post
    dear all,
    this is a letter to a teacher from a parent .please rewiew & correct.

    "Dear teacher, Madam/Sir:
    Sub: Missing school diary & and costume for the open day for Afrin
    Good morning,
    Hope you are doing well.
    With reference to the above subject I would like to inform you that Afrin missed lost her school diary yesterday. So could you please check whether it find somewhere if someone found it in your classroom.
    We already purchased all the costumes as you advised & sending with her today and Afrin brought them with her today. It These includes the following: a frock, gloves, stockings, a chain & and a stud. She didn't bring with her the Bbutterfly wings for it might be damaged. we are not sending because it may damage. Please check the costumes and send us a feed back

    Yours sincerely,''

    (not a teacher)

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