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    does this sound right?

    Currently, there are four main types of existing accesses throughout the market: ADSL, Cable modem, wireless and satellites that have been analyzed, in addition, to have carried out a complete access description and having interviews with the most successful operator in the implementation of each one of these technologies. As well as, present the opinions from the leading providers in each area concerning the services evolution.

    im stuck in this part:
    satellites that have been analyzed, in addition, to have carried out a complete access

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    l1- I'd use 'access' in the singular- the plural is 'types'.
    l2- I'd get rid of 'that' - ..have been analyzed with a complete descritpion of access and interviews with the most successful operator for the implementation of each of these technologies. In addition, the opinions of the leading providers in each area concerning the evolution of services are presented

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    i really appreciate this, thak you very much.

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